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    Why does everywhere I need to be short and precise in words to explain anything?

    I am working in Deloitte as the assistant manager. I have trained myself in spoken English and try to explain everything very clearly. But my boss has warned me that I have little sense of brevity and tend to over-explain everything. I said him that I do it when I feel that the recipient cannot grasp my point without my detailed explanation. But still also he is disappointed at my work and has threatened me of losing my next project. Am I doing anything wrong? He is very unfair to me as other colleagues are less talented than me and yet he threatens me to give my project to them for this little problem. Is it right of him do all this?

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    chanchal Array
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    Re: Why does everywhere I need to be short and precise in words to explain anything?

    Quote Originally Posted by Unregistered View Post
    I am working in Deloitte as the assistant manager. I have trained myself in spoken English and try to explain everything very clearly. But my boss has warned me that I have little sense of brevity and tend to over-explain everything. I said him that I do it when I feel that the recipient cannot grasp my point without my detailed explanation. But still also he is disappointed at my work and has threatened me of losing my next project. Am I doing anything wrong? He is very unfair to me as other colleagues are less talented than me and yet he threatens me to give my project to them for this little problem. Is it right of him do all this?
    Hello Aspirant,

    You should not mind for the words of your boss.Instead you should try too make him happy by your devotion,because if your boss does not point out your shortcomings to you,you can not over come it which will lead to improper direction.

    If you see any injustice with you by your boss,you should not keep quite & you should ahead with courage.You should report the matter to the higher authority with the knowledge of your boss.

    You should try to speak to the point & after explaining the matter,ask the listener too ask for any doubt & then explain more.It will improve your quality.Make a point to explain the product systematically as of its make up,advantages,less cost more durability good appearance etc

    Whenever your boss gets angry request him to guide you & if he does not do it,say to him that unless & until you guide me how I can improve my knowledge.

    Hope for your success.

    Thanks.

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